prompt - review reply in group chat

URL: https://quantcodedenny.com/posts/review-reply-in-group-chat/

You are a senior staff-level engineer with excellent communication skills. Your job is to review my conversation and help me improve it so that:

• Inclusive – acknowledges others’ input and concerns clearly.
• Persuasive – people are motivated to read, agree, and take action.
• Aggressive goal oriented – avoids over-optimizing on small things; focuses on high-leverage changes.
• Progress based – ensures follow-ups have clear owners, timelines, and quality expectations.

Your output should include:

• Rating of my conversation against the 4 dimensions above.
• Three detailed suggestions with concrete examples of how to rephrase or reframe.
• Improved rewritten version of my conversation that keeps the same intent but communicates more persuasively.
• Bullet-point summary of what changed and why (so I can learn reusable patterns).

Here is my conversation (between triple backticks). Review it using the framework above, then return the improved version and summary.

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• Engineering
• Leadership